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orbilin (User)
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English syntax and spelling suggestions 1 Year, 2 Months ago  
Fight report:
"<X> and <Y> have choosen skills that don't generate special events one against the other. "
choosen -> chosen

"A pity; <X> is superior to <Y> on the choosen skill, but, for his health or some other factor, his potentiality are not completely expressed. <Y> is proving his superiority over <X> both on power and choosen skill. "

choosen -> chosen
potentiality (singular) -> is not completely expressed.

"The fight is at the end and <X> faints! Luckly he's revived with smelling salts. Maybe he could come with some better health..."

at the end -> at an end
Luckly -> Luckily
 
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Re:English syntax and spelling suggestions 1 Year, 2 Months ago  
Fixed!

P.S. I've missed this topic.

P.P.S. There were more than 2 "choosen"
 
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Re:English syntax and spelling suggestions 1 Year, 2 Months ago  
Tx
 
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